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Re: DoaV (1st version): Prologue
I liked that excerpt from your story, it had a good twist. And i like trying to figure out what kind of a person Yazra is, but she is very ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: DoaV : Pilot section
I love this story so far! It's a very good attention grabber, from the very first sentence, i knew i had to keep reading, cause i was wondering why she ...
Jan 20, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 5) Journal of a Prisoner
I like this so far. This is all of your work that i have read so far, so i'm going to try to find what you wrote that goes before ...
Jan 20, 2008 -
Re: Power
I liked it. It was good that you left the "it" open enough to symbolize what ever the readeer wanted "it" to be. I'm not sure if you meant the ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Love poem.
Hey, it was ok. Which poetry isn't my strength, so i can't really talk. Although, it didn't seem to have a sence of rythym, which poems need.
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: confused
Hey! I joined this place like a year ago, but i'm still a newbie, cuz i only got on once, and then i started getting on like 5 days ago. ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: The flower fields
Hey, very very good story. Although, there were some things that did confuse me. For instance, at the beginning, you said that there were five people attending the meating, but ...
Jan 5, 2008
