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Good: The dinosaur is cute and bloodthirsty Bad: It's dead Worse: It died of a plague that is still around and will kill the entire human race A purple, sparkly ...

I really enjoyed this, although the end was a bit confusing. I'm sure it will all clear up in the next chapter. The first thing I wanted to address was ...

Such a heart-breaking first chapter! I could feel Chad's pain at Alexis's death. One sentence that confused me was this one: "The other abided in the Otherworld. Where no mortal ...

I’m like the ghost that’s never been Nobody looks up when I walk in I’ve left my mark on none that see I don’t think they’ll remember me In hallways ...

Banned for saying fyi, although then I'd have to ban myself as well. :)

I was searching the web for a good writing forum and I found...YWS! I actually just came across it again from months of inactivity. Hopefully now I'm back to stay.

So good! A little short, but very good! I was thinking that maybe you should change the millions of people to a smaller number because you referred to the place ...

This was really good and sweet! I can understand how it made you tear up. The first suggestion I have is about the spacing. You really don't need to indent ...

Hey all! I'm Xan (or you can call me by my username, I really don't care). I'm 15 (almost 16), a sophomore, and I live in the US. I write ...