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Re: All I Have
Hey all. I will expand on this I promise, but things have been busy lately, so it'll take a while. Thanks for the support, and it'll be up soon... er ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Exodus Preview
I really love this, your description is great. One thing though, you may want to make less seperate paragraphs it makes the reading just a bit choppy. Waiting for more. ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: All I Have
Thanks. :) I fixed that and you were right, it did sound off. I was only going to leave this as a short story, but since you mentioned it, I ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: Any Exceptional Books About Writing?
I love 'Writing Magic' by Gail Carson Levine, it was the first book I ever read about writing and I still use a lot of things I read in that ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: All I Have
“N-no…. please… don’t… I need to put dinner on the t-table for my fa-family.” My grip on the knife tightened. “Hand it over, peasant!” I barked, taking in the man ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: I need help from girls aged 14-17
A phrase that's actually making a comeback at my school is 'tubular'.
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Herbal remedies
Here's some info Ifound on catnip; Catnip tends to have a sedative effect on humans. It is most often drunk as a tea. It is also useful for settling an ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: To whom it may concern:
This is a prologue to my fantasy story. Please and thank you.
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: name association
Someone who was made fun of as a child for her slightly provactive last name. Kinsey-Isolde Marks
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Jack's Critique Emporium [BACK IN BUSINESS]
It's in Fantasy Fiction and I don't have a title yet, which is why it's called 'Indunian Story'. It's a prolouge to a larger story I'm still working on. It's ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Dialect
I live in New York, so New England. Everyone I know says "pop", and the people who say "soda" tend to have families who come from out of state. All ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Dialect
I live in New York, but I have family friends living in Connecticut and as far I can tell it's soda.
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Thrown off a horse
It depends on how hard the horse threw her; if she sort of slid off or the horse got spooked a bit and she lost balance or if it bucked ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Ancient Israel/ Canaan
I'm looking especially for; -types of foods that were common -clothing descriptions - ways of earning a livelihood - types of homes (building materials, size etc.) I'd really appreciate it ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: What's your favorite quote?
"Firelight might not let you read fine stories, but you'll stay warm and you won't see the dust on the floor."- Irish Proverb
Jan 8, 2009
