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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter One

    This is incredible! You're very good at writing strong, captivating description. It's very easy to picture these scenes as I read them. A few things to note, though: Make sure ...

    Mar 17, 2020


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality