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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter One

    This is incredible! You're very good at writing strong, captivating description. It's very easy to picture these scenes as I read them. A few things to note, though: Make sure ...

    Mar 16, 2020


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy