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Luna Lovegood

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative
    Re: Motel Midnight


    Dec 28, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy
    Re: The town of Richardson

    Hi! Here's a review from me : ) So straight off the bat, I do think it was a little rushed, no suspense either. But I can see where you're ...

    Aug 26, 2021

  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Re: My First Friend

    Hi! This isn't a critical review, I just wanted to say what I thought :) Let's start with the prologue: I think you described selective mutism amazingly, as someone who ...

    Aug 16, 2021

  • Short Story » Humor, General
    Re: A Story Without Any E's

    This was amazing!! Definitely made me smile. I'm inspired to try and make a story without a specific letter, it seems like such a fun, but challenging idea! I agree ...

    Aug 5, 2021

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Don't Cry

    I love your writing style and choice of words : ) I can feel the emotions of the characters and its very realistic, I love it. It gave me an ...

    Aug 4, 2021

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