My, what a wonderful personification piece this is! I really felt for the pencil and now stare at the one in my skull cup and wonder where it was before. ...

I am here for your emotional rescue! Well not really, I'm much too lazy for that but I am here to give you a review! I know you've heard this ...

I knew someone would have a thread on this. Just so you know, it's not over. Another novel is tentatively slated to come out next fall under the name "Breaking ...

I know you've told me about having panic attacks before but never in detail and this put some of those conversations we've had into perspective. I've never had a panic ...

I wish there were some names in this story and some explanation as to why Cinderella and her prince broke up in the first place. The reaction of her redheaded ...

The school nearly suspended you over something like this? What kind of uptight school do you attend? Okay...done with the rant. I enjoyed this story! And since you posted this ...

Very nice! This was by far my favorite part: I turned to face her and stopped in shock. She sighed slightly and turned fully to face me. She was the ...

This piece was delicious and I mean that in every sense. You made everything so wonderfully descriptive, that for lack of creativity on my part, it was like a fine ...

So THIS was the piece you were working on when I was chatting with you! Well, damn. I loved it! The sensuality turned into brutality and horror rather effortlessly, a ...

I liked it! Well, what I could understand of it. Sam has a good point, you really shouldn't bring up so many different terms and objects without explaining what they ...

Other than what the previous commenters mentioned, I don't have anything to critique. Wow. Just wow. This was delightfully dark. The detail of his eating the insulation thinking it was ...

I really can't say much in ways of critique since those who posted before me already voiced my concerns. Despite that, I did like this piece. Though I am confused ...

But there was no more time to think. The sun faded off into the distance, and with it came a green light. We drove past. The bolded line threw me ...

I loved it for the fact that it was short and sweet and made you feel for the young girl and the boy that captured her with his grin. Though ...

*whistles* Woooo. Now that was a delightful piece of twisted literature. Yum. I have to agree with all the critiques that Trident made since those were the ones I was ...