lumpy_joe108

Would love some feedback. Its a tad long btw, sorry. :) “If you are not free to choose wrongly and irresponsibly, you are not free at all” Jacob Hornberger Free ...

Hey Loveless I enjoyed reading the first part of your emotional story even though I'm not a big fan of the genre. A strong point is definitely your characterization, you ...

Hey Smurf I thought your story was quite engaging right from the start. I also liked its light-hearted feel, eg. ripping off clothes to reveal silver wetsuits and power swimming. ...