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Re: Untitled Pantoum
i like it its differnt but at the same time entertaining to read lulu
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Prologue:The Golden Egg
The Wizard of A'isha sat at his desk re reading the letter that had come days before. He had been waiting here in his dark cold castle for what seemed ...
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Re: The Tome of Constellation: Chapter 1
Niyana shook pale hair out of her eyes and peered around the hard stone wall, calm despite her current situation. "Are you sure we can trust him?" she whispered. "I ...
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Re: I wrote this story, I need some ideas on how to improve it
this sentence is a little bit repetitive She hates it when her mother is mad at her, but since her fathers death she always seems to be mad at her. ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Pre Chapter 1
firstly, you shouldent repeat the name so close to it's last use Sota was sitting on his bed studying and It was early in the morning and Sota was about ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: this is a new piece so please read
Chapter 1. Fighting wars with myself Dearest Leona, It’s strange to think of how a person can wake up one morning expecting their normal dreary day to day life to ...
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Re: pianist that drains soul
Sorry I had to repost this it wouldnt let me just re edit it Sara had been depressed for as long as she could remember, it was her horrid mother ...
Aug 28, 2007 -
Re: Loki
The double doors of the entrance were rusted; the glass on either half was shattered and secured by a steel chain and heavy padlock. you need to refrase this sentance ...
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: Warsaw Pact and Viktor Georgiyevich Kulikov
please i really need the subject information, badly, please
Aug 20, 2007 -
Re: totally revised. piano player that draines soul
Sara had been depressed for as long as she could remember, it was her horrid mother who made her feel so sad. She was always there with a look of ...
Aug 15, 2007 -
Re: piano player that drains souls
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- She walked over to the shining black piano and started playing. Imagining dark hallways, burning candles, and cobweb co
Aug 14, 2007 -
Re: Music- Guitar/Bass wielding lovers
wow way awsome
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: piano player that dranes souls it needs help
She walked over to the window and pulled the dusty moth eaten curtains back just a sliver. If she was caught she would be punished, again, but she didn't care. ...
Aug 12, 2007 -
Re: watching eyes part one
She stood there, staring at them. They were on their knees, bowing to her, as they should be. Then the rain came down. A silk umbrella was put above her ...
Jun 18, 2007 -
Re: A Glimpse Of West Coast Youth
these pics are waaay fun!
Jun 14, 2007
