lulu_lizzrd

weel to be a bit honest, it sounds like you're writting a story just a a strange format lulu

ok so far i have liked all your work! your funny and extreamly original! its good to see something new! lulu ps hope to see more!!!!!

umm its interesting, i dont exactly see the connection but oh well lulu

wow, i dont think ive ever laughed that hard! if i could but this from you i would! you are a miniature Shel Silverstine! exelent job! lulu

it's rather funny because you pretty much described me and every other kid, teenager, and person, to an exact piont. I think this was exalently written lulu

wow, i really really like this one it actually sits perfectly in your mouth when spoken, it's exreamly good! lulu

this poem really shows how the person cares for the other, and how they trust them and what not lulu

i like this you really show the emotion lulu

this poem didnt make much sense and it was a little bit to much to take in lulu

the last line "To love you need two" it doesnt really fit in to the smooth poem you were writting above, but other than that its good lulu

i have to admit, it doesnt make much sense to me lulu

i really like this, it's not like every other poem, you strew the words together in a nice simplistic way as well lulu

i dont want to be mean, but every one talks about that problem, but you should try to be a little bit differnet, the name is what struck me, but ...

the part about "my dripping, lazily" that doesnt really fit in lulu

i like it, but the tital doesnt really show of the poem lulu