lulu_daisy_101

I like it...I do...but in some stanzas, I find that it doesn't flow. I think u should edit it and make the sections that don't flow, flow. Like this My ...

I love the way that I can't look away When you turn, your slender face gleams in the light Your pale white skin glowing at the beach Your rough hands ...

I really like it because its short and precise. It actually touched me and made me feel emotions that I was tricking myself to not believe in. It opened my ...

I hate the way you act around me I hate the way that you never hold me What do I like about you? I hate the way your shirt smells ...

I can still remember that day, that day so long ago I was sitting in the passenger side of the car. eating my Tim Horton's chocolate chip muffin, and drinking ...

I no what you think Its gonna be another boring poem About how somebody has unspoken able beauty Or just to short of a skirt But this is about your ...

In the summer when I go to bed The sun still streaming overhead My bed becomes so small and hot With sheets and pillow in a knot, And then I ...

I thought this poem was quite good. I also thought it was quite choppy and it was start a sentence, finish a sentence sort ove thing. I did not flow, ...

The marine touched me in a weird way that I have never been touched in before, and it makes me sad and happy at the same time :( :D. I ...

I got a little board in it and I don't no why? There was the occasional grammar mistakes and somethings had wrong tenses but the whole thing in total was ...

OHHHH.....AND BY THE WAY, IT ALMOST MADE ME CRY.....because its just soooo emotional and I LOVE IT :D :D :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -LULU_DAISY_101

That poem was soooo made me feel dead in my stomach and alive in my eyes. A true person had to right WAS JUST SOOOOO AWSOME.....keep the good stufff comming. ...

In the smmer when I go to bed The sun still streaming overhead My bed becomes so small and hot With sheets and pillow in a knot, And then I ...