lukasagitta

A/N: Rated 16+ for implied drug use, subject matter, language, etc. This was a really experimental piece that I wrote as per a friend's rather specific request over a year ...

Ahhh, Prohibition. What a failure of an amendment. Mm, I really like this. The dialogue was really nice. It didn't feel too inaccessible, but I could definitely tell that they ...

I don't know if this is a stylistic choice or not, but the huge wall-of-text paragraph was a bit hard on the eyes. Try putting it into more manageable paragraphs, ...

Oooh, I very much liked this! Two little things, though. Agatha was a short person, she couldn't have been more than 5 feet tall, and she had to use a ...

This was an amazing piece. You have no reason to be nervous. It's clear to me that you can pull off novels and short stories easily. I was deterred at ...

My name is Terry Henkins , also known as Ace on the streets. I'm 6 ft exactly. I have brown hair, blue eyes and the abs of a God. I'm ...

Whoa! I lovelovelove when poems/stories grab me right at the first line. I'm the type of person who puts down a book if the first chapter doesn't spark my interest, ...

Mm, this was good! Short and sweet--that's good. You got your point across, you made your impact, and then you ended it. It is funny, isn't it? Most people don't ...

This was...amazing. I was in awe from start to finish. That first line conveys so much with so little. That whole first section is perfect. I felt like I could ...

A/N: Pleaseplease please do NOT read if you are a recovering anorexic. This is DEFINITELY triggering. Rated 16+ for subject matter, language, imagery, etc. Based on the song "Paper Bag" ...

A/N: Rated 16+ for language, subject matter, imagery, etc. First story posted here! *sits on hands nervously* Sixteen Black open-toed platform heels hit the pavement, sweeping across it like a ...

This is a very interesting opening and I'm intrigued about future installments, but there are a few grammatical errors sprinkled in. Sometimes, like in times like these, This part seems ...

This is the first piece of writing on this site that I saw, and I'm happy to say that I quite enjoyed it! The opening lines are really great. Immediately, ...

Hi there~ My name is Luka. c: I've been writing since I was in kindergarten, and I'd like to think that I've improved a lot since then. I'm always reading ...