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Heyy there, ash, I'm extra excited to read your new chapter, no matter what you say, so there =P :wink: :D hehe. So, here I go... Through the opaque glass, ...

Here is the promised review. But two advanced warnings for you: I can be pretty lazy, so I haven't read the reviews above me, so I apologise beforehand if I ...

Now, this is looking a little lonely, so I thought I'd pop by and give you a review (: Just to warn you now, I'm very nit picky (obsessively so ...

This seems a little lonely of reviews, so *drum role* =P I'm here to the rescue!! And to make sure your work isn't feeling lonely or unloved :D I hope ...

Heyy there Night Mistress, here is your review, I hope it help you out =D Chapter two We rode the bike at city speed limits. I passed blunt directions to ...

I have finally found some time to read your most recent chapter!! *dances round the room* =P So, here goes... Some minor Lucy OCD nitpicks: :D mouth falling [s]a-gap[/s] agape ...

I am finally back home and have decided to celebrate my arrival by reading your chapters (which always makes me happy =P :D ). So, here goes ... oh and ...

Chapter 3 Mystery Text When I got to school the next day I was ready for it to be over. First and second block flew bye, then I got to ...

Chapter One [s]I stood [/s] outside the rotten, iron gate looking into the old, abandoned manor [Now expand this description of both the iron gate and the house and have ...

Here I am for the review you requested, and I have to say, I was disappointed by the amazing quality of it, as it meant that I couldn't be as ...

Wow, this was a really great starting chapter and really draws the reader into the rest of the story. I love the unique turn you have of this story (that ...

This is a great preface, ash, you had me glued to the computer screen throughout. I only picked up on one little nit-pick: I managed to choke out before the ...

First off, I would like to apologise for getting round to review this so late - I've gotten so busy all of the sudden, it's total madness =P. Anywhooo, I ...

Now, I'm slightly confused, you asked me to review this, but I already have, or have you edited it and you want me to re-review it (which I don't mind!!)?? ...

If Love is not Enough By Angel of Death Chapter 1 October 3, 2007 Izzy stared at the front desk, her eyes mirroring the face of the librarian. I blushed ...