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Re: The Lonely Roman
Good story, exciting action and you explained what had happened before, just a few things 1)"When I awoke drank water from my satchel", this needs to be When I awoke ...
Aug 31, 2016
Good story, exciting action and you explained what had happened before, just a few things 1)"When I awoke drank water from my satchel", this needs to be When I awoke ...
Aug 31, 2016