lsilvernail

Wow, I really enjoyed this! I have a fascination with all things Japanese, so your story caught my eye. I see very little that I myself would correct. I know ...

"Quill of the Magus" Peter stopped and stared at the curious store. It had not been there yesterday, nor any other day over the past nine years, of that much ...

Hey, I'd appreciate a critique of my story: Could you also tell a couple of other people about it maybe? I haven't gotten any critiques yet! Thanks!

Wow, good job! You obviously have a sense of humour. I liked the interesting twist at the end. Funny story! Now allow me to dismember it. You need to pick ...

I filled this story chock-full of subtle and not-so-subtle norse mythology. My inspiration was a scary image I thought of when I was daydreaming. “The Helheim Club” “Spare some change ...

First of all, I'd just like to say: Wow! This is a great piece of writing! It was amazingly descriptive and visual. Not only that, but the philosophies you portray ...

This is a good piece of writing. It was very visual; I liked all of the imagery! There were, of course, just some minor grammatical errors, but those are easily ...

Thanks for the reception... I really enjoy reading just general fiction, but especially fantasy. I'll also read interesting nonfiction... I love facts about mythology, civilizations, and just random t

Hey, you can call me Lucas. I'm a new member, and I'm quite impressed with this site! I'm 16, I live in Canada, and I love writing. I've got one ...