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Re: Your Writing Resolution
I want to be more confident about my work because sometimes people will say a piece I've written is good and I'll still believe it's bad. I also need to ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: It's a Short Life
This is a story that I've made up from the world of the Vampire Academy books by Richelle Mead. You don't need to know anything about the story as these ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Where I Belong (Extended)
This has the same beginning as my piece 'Where I Belong' but I added a bid chunk in the middle. I hope you like it :) I walked along the ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Red Mist
Hey, This piece had a good flow to it aand I enjoyed reading it. There were a few things I want to talk about though. I liked the idea of ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: The Idol
Hey glitterbox, This is a really different piece from your last one, and it was really interesting. I loved the way you wrote this because it gave you more of ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Code of the mistake
Hey, I loved this :) Karma is a very unique character and you could easily make this into more of a story if you wanted to. She's a bit crazy ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Where I Belong
This was qiute a random, and it doesn't have much of a point, but I hope you like it. Where I Belong I walked along the beach, dragging my bare ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Paranormality
This was an interesting story and there were a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes. So many that I'm not going to go through them. I got where you were ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
Hey, This is one of thee funniest stories I've read on this site. I especially loved the bits when Harry and Voldemort were talking because what they said was so ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Child-34... Part one
Hey, I really liked the start of this, it gave a really good mood to start up a story. I also liked the way the character narrated, he/she sounded quite ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Unicorns VS Zombies
Hey, I love the idea, it sounds srious, but always with a kind of amusing note because of the type of creatures in it. There is one just one mistake ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Pit of a Miracle
Hey, I found this story very interesting. At the beginning, I was a bit confused with what this story was going to be about. I wasn't sure if I was ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Darkness
This was quite a different kind of story. It started off well, I enjoyed the first bit. But then it went into the part about Atlantis and I found myself ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Glitter In the Dark-Prologue
Hey, I really liked this prologue, it gave me a good introduction to the story, but I was a bit unsure about what the star thing was about. You could ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Look Up
Look Up I stumbled as a bullet rushed past my ear, throwing me off balance. It didn’t take me long to right myself, and I ran harder, needing to get ...
Jan 29, 2011
