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Re: Dust to Dust.
wow this is fabulous!! I don't know how you thougth up all the words and got them to flow just perfectly!!! Its quite fabulous in my opinion....... I especially enjoyed ...
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: I Love You
Wow this is a fabulous piece.. I really enjoyed the format that you put it in thats very clever!!!!! Nothing really bad to say!!!!
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: Back again
This was a great poem but i have to agree you skip around a little bit with the tone and the rhymes, but i like it because i can follow ...
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: He stands at your door
He stands at your door… He knocks twice only you can’t hear the thud of his fists against the door… His eyes plead for help, but when you ask him ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Simple Solution
Simple Stranger They never saw how she suffered…they laughed at her when she cried… She put her heart in their hands and begged for forgiveness but they just threw it ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Just One Thing
I am new to this site but your work is the first thing i had the pleasure of reading and i think that it is a beautiful piece....the end is ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: I'm new!!
Hi!!! I'm new...i was referred to this site by a friend and he said it would help me with writing, but i'm a bit computer stupid so i'm not sure ...
Sep 14, 2008
