loupgarouangel

Well done, I think you did a nice job capturing how most writers feel pertaining to their work. It could have used a bit more emotion, but captured a whole ...

Your use of detail is great, the suspenseful start brought about by your telling of the drum roll is catching for a new reader, well done. The tone and mood ...

I’m unsure if this is a continuation or the start of something new, either way you’re off to a great start. Your use of detail is great, eye catching and ...

I love the overall mood and tone you set for the reader, a lack of hope felt by the character, only for it to be restored in the end, a ...