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Re: I am....
Well done, I think you did a nice job capturing how most writers feel pertaining to their work. It could have used a bit more emotion, but captured a whole ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: And there was drum roll chapter 1 part 1
Your use of detail is great, the suspenseful start brought about by your telling of the drum roll is catching for a new reader, well done. The tone and mood ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: The Others Part 1
I’m unsure if this is a continuation or the start of something new, either way you’re off to a great start. Your use of detail is great, eye catching and ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: The curse and Lucky
I love the overall mood and tone you set for the reader, a lack of hope felt by the character, only for it to be restored in the end, a ...
May 8, 2009