loulou

Hi Steggy, thank you so much. Your interpretation is certainly interesting. I apologise for the header, it transferred over when I pasted from my notes. Perhaps I will expand on ...

Just for clarification for any future comments. I am not seeking reviews in the sense of structure, plot, characters, or the conventions of a short story. This was playing upon ...

Hi, thank you for your response. This isn't supposed to be a story in that sort of a sense, I have written many for years. I was experimenting with meaning ...

Hi, thank you for your response. This isn't supposed to be a story in that sort of a sense, I have written many for years. I was experimenting with meaning ...

Please leave your interpretation in the comments if you have time. I would love to see what people think.