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im guilty that i havnt atually read it, but going on the film which was amazingly weird 1984 by george orwel thanks some sick deranged awesomness

hi fun4eva welcome, im new here too :) this poems shows a keen sorrow of the goodbye. and i really like the contrast of the moments before and after it. ...

hi seekers, what do u need u hated it lol thanks for saying it was wel written. do u mean u didnt like the story line so far??? it does ...

thank you esme for the tips and everything :) it does need editing, for the capitals and comma use (as i tend to over use them) and ovbiously speeling. and ...

hi kaylyn wel other than the gramical things al ready discussed i think this peice could be very promising. ok it is a littel clecha (sp) a nightmare like, but ...

thanks kaylyn yh it was first type so spelling is gonna b a problem lol and there will be more coming x

Thanks for all the feed back Kaylyn JabberHut and Esmeits really appricated. i think this needs a full re write so hopfully when ever i get time i can improve ...

yh ur right it does need more. but it was kinda a spur of the moment thing, and it doesnt really go anywhere at the moment, perhaps i can create ...

this snipit has been incorperated into my larger story, its in fantasy fiction called luannas story so far, go cheek it out, im looking for reviews!!! x

shit that was good, pretty much sums up my speachless expression right now. the links between description and talking were effectless, creating a really good flow throughout the peice. the ...

wel here goes first review... the decribing was sketching put pecfectly formed, perhaps you could elaborate on certain things. i mean at the start you sed sherrical mounatin range, which ...

woo sum of those photos are really nice im likeing the nature animal theme and that portrait was ace!