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Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 6
Uh oh..... I think you just made Fiera mad. Poor Nick, he's so confused. Review Time (I need the points after all) I like how Fiera got mad at you ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Chapter One- Pollen Party
I know that this is a draft, so keep working on it. I'll tell you some things I noticed. Time for review. Get out your books because I am horrible ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: The Kingdom of Boredom, Chpt. 5
I like where you are going with this. Time for review- I'm not very good at reviewing but I'll do my best. The part about Nick fighting for a playground ...
Sep 10, 2013