lostthought

Hey! I'm guessing none are reviewing the technical stuff any more. Characters, characters, characters. Honestly, can we just know about our grammar? Nitpicks even a moment extra end of year ...

I've been following you subtly but now I am reviewing your latest piece! This guy is one of the most twisted guys in the group. Nitpicks it’s face flat it’s ...

Hello again mess! Don't mind me. I'm just digging through your story to see what can be salvaged and what needs to be chunked. Nitpicks “Maybe it isn’t” she said ...

Hi there! Don't scrap this until I get a say of your wrong-doings. *sigh* I better hurry before you change it. Again. Nitpicks slowly rolled in her bed, stirring and ...

Ok mess. You're getting that review now. Now shush till I'm done. Nitpicks Determined to get the bird she began to make her way off the path. Determined to get ...

Hey there! Interesting fan fiction. Never heard of the Black Butler. Is it just me, or is that nine year old a bit too advanced in his vocabulary? Because, honestly, ...

Oh, so that's what you showed me. Well, I'm here to review buggie. Nitpicks Yay! Buggie, I didn't see any! Ok, so ghost boy is here. La, la, la, dee, ...

Hey there again! I'm here to review! Nitpicks No nitpicks this time! He was going to be married? Here comes the bride, here comes the- where is the groom? The ...

All those knots and she doesn't know her name? Well, happy review day, I'm here to review! Nitpicks Across the room the loom keeps working by itself Since Across the ...

This little chapter has been rotting in the green room with none to review it. Don't you fear, I am here! Nitpicks yourselves.” he said Replace that period with a ...

Hey there! Here to review this very confusing piece. Nitpicks Okay why the hell You need a comma between 'okay' and 'why' Pretending to be disgusted I started to pry ...

Hi meg! I'm here to review your most recent chapter. And no, I did not see the name Lornya anywhere. So you are fine. Nitpicks She rested her head against ...

Hey meg! Having a fun review day? You'll be my 20th review this day so let's review! Nitpicks I saw no nitpicks I found Gandalf! He only carried a staff. ...

Last chapter! I'm caught up on reviewing this thing! Yay! Ok, let's actually review though. Nitpicks Yeah well you keep hanging around that Dylan guy You need a comma after ...

One more chapter to review! Let's get this one done first, at least. Nitpicks Stupid bloody family, This is the only nitpick I have. You need a comma between 'stupid' ...