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  • Novel / Chapter » General, Other Re: Kelpie - Character Descriptions

    Woah, I haven't reviewed in a while. Okay, well, let's get to looking at your characters here then! Survivor: I reckon Kelpies are noticeable from other horses, judging from your ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 6

    Allo, Aura! *Mwuahahahaha totally didn't spend the last I don't know how long because my mind's been going foggy with time rereading so I can actually review one of the ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: No Romance: Chapter 9

    Allo again, Adri! So I'm just going to review this chapter even though I'm completely spoiled. *a shame, but oh well, let us begin with the review!* Let us hit ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: No Romance: Chapter 11

    What's up, Adri? It's review day, though I'm sure you knew that. God, you're going to be my first review in an epically long time, considering my last one was ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 10.

    Hello. Since them doubters in chat don't believe in me, I SHALL get to chapter 20 today. Thing is, I'm just now finishing the ones I meant to do yesterday ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 9.

    Hello, hello. How're you and your cliffhangers? You'd think that they'd come faster if Rease said, "Help! Sadie's boyfriend is whipping Cayden!" Oh well. Nitpicks: The boy had short white ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 8.

    Hi, so what is with you and creepy cliffhangers? Honestly Adrian! I'd like to read one chapter without having to expect something horrifying (although the next most likely be). Nitpicks: ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 7.

    Hello, hello. I must comment on how the last sentence sounds threatening. "We are going to have fun." Sounds like something that belongs in Saw! Nitpicks: She felt a felt ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 6.

    Gah, I have to catch up with reviews on an empty stomach! Well, I will try to get to somewhere between 20-30. Let's start this review! Nitpicks: Trying to postpone ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 5.

    Hello, hello. After this review, I need to sort out my cereal. Really, coco puffs with tooty fruities? ICK. Nitpicks: The girls voice was so perky Well, since the girl ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 4.

    Hello again! I'm happier because I'm enjoying my special toast which you dissed so let's hope I don't spontaneously post more youtube videos. Nitpicks: but it would suck be bad ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 3.

    Annnnnd we're back to the exciting chapter of SiS. Why don't we review this baby and hope it doesn't steal our candy? Nitpicks: The house smelled of cinnamon and apple ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 2.

    Hello again Adrian! I must review spam you and then actual spam you later! I'm just going to ignore all below reviews (even though I will check to make sure ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 1.

    Ladeedo, I need to review you. I'm just going to ignore the other reviews down below me and do my own fresh review whilst pretending this is my first time ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 43.

    Hello Raven Adrian! I would've finished earlier but >.> school. So if you forgot the drill, nitpicky stuff first and then some story plot stuff. Nitpicks Her clothes were wet, ...

    Jan 19, 2015


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