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Thank you! I'm super glad you like it so far. I'll take all your advice into consideration and be sure to review part two of your story soon! Also, I'm ...

Thanks for your imput Harry! It%u2019s super useful.

Thanks for the review! I named all the Polnet siblings after James Bond characters, hence Q, Mallory, and Honey. Anyways, I really appreciate the review!

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it.

Thank you so much! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! I%u2019ll work on descriptions for Chapter 4!

Thanks for the review! To clear it up, Leonard's the father (who's missing) and Mallory is the brother (who drowned). I'll make sure to tag you next chapter. :)

Hey! Thanks for the review! I'll totally consider these things when I write the next chapter. I probably should have split this up into two chapters (or just made it ...

Thanks for the review, whatcha! It was really helpful. I'll definitely try to use better verbs and such in the next chapter. :)

Thanks for the review, Alice! I really appreciate it!

Thanks for the review! I'll try to shorten the dialogue in the beginning and maybe make the ending a bit longer in the next chapter. Your review was really kind, ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'm in the process of writing Chapter Two right now, so I'll definitely use your suggestions!

Oh, also, I'll add more detail in the next chapters! =P Thanks for the feedback.