looby-lou

You really need to read your poem through before you post it up here. There are lots of spelling mistakes and in many places it doesnt scan properly. Keep trying.

Im sorry that i dont know the details... maybe it comes across in the poem that i am ACTUALLY really bad at science...

i'm not going to argue with you for what is your personal opinion no worries! If you could do something for me though, could you explain how to make it ...

I like it. I don't understand Star Wars at all, but this poem kind of makes me realize why my dad forced my to sit through them all! I also ...

I guess you're kinda tired of reading this by now, but the above are right, you do need to work on the last stanza... I don't know why... But otherwise ...

tell you what, we shall all now back away from the evil poem, and leave the topic alone... No seriously i thank you all for the comments because this way ...

Otherwise No one really cares your boy is all the way in England, because we are not you and it doesn't matter to us. Thats a bit harsh! Also the ...

Wow. That is really cool. It reminded me kind of LOTR?? But then I don't read a lot of this stuff... I liked this! x frm Lucy

soz its not meant to be preachy! x frm lucy

I just want to say that the past 3 posts probably aren't very helpful to izzy! Ok, now my review. I liked it! It was cute and funny, and that ...

Thanks for all comments- didn't expect so much! I will follow all advice given. However I do not want to edit this poem because it is always good to have ...

This is a poem that tells of a boy, Shy and retiring, naturally coy, Love he craved but from attention he shied, Gave out the opinion he had everything to ...

Loved it. End. x frm lucy

I thought it was pretty cute! However there are a few too many syllables in the first part. For instance, generally lymericks have the beat: la la -la la la ...

Hi! I'm surprised no ones answered this yet. It seems really good! I too am a worshipper of Doctor Who. It flowed really well in most places, here are just ...