llobalito8

I have to start by saying that this is really really great. The imagery was great, the rhyme scheme, the choice or words everything. It read like a story, and ...

The two sat in peaceful silence. They we're in a quiet bar, shortly after mid-night. The man had a beer, while his wife held her tears. One hand around her ...

This was extremely interesting. I loved the concept. My favorite part was the end where he thanks the man for his full day's pay and the line "12 dollars should ...

yeah, I'm really not even sure why i posted this. It is rushed, and kind of pointless. haha whatever, thanks to everyone for the reviews!

I don't think its true, yet of course it may be since truths are just truths to those whom believe if belief is the law in the land of the ...

thanks to all of you for posting! and yes gahks you did review on of my poems and thank you for that! Why don't you like russian literature? Once you ...

Hi everyone! My short stories are mostly surreal. I love the magical, out of this world kind of stuff. My poems tend to be dark. With poems I just let ...

Hey obviously I'm new since I'm posting here, but yeah I randomly found this website and it looks like just what i need to improve my writing skills. I write ...

The Way's aways away from tomorrow but we're a step closer today The Way's aways away from tomorrow but closer than yesterday The Way's aways away form forever but forever ...

Hi I'm new to reviewing so don't expect this to be the greatest review, but i'll let you know what I think. I think that for your first poem it ...

I think this was very good. Aside from that last verse the entire poem flowed very nicely. I agree that maybe you should add an extra stanza and have it ...

She smelled of death, like a rotting soul, yet still, I did approach her, I wished to help, I thought I could, but never have I been so wrong, she ...

haha this was funny. extremely entertaining. Obviously not a deep poem, but who says that poems need to be deep. The rhyme was almost perfect aside from that line about ...

i enjoyed this piece. To be honest I did not see a direct connection between the poem and the artwork, but then again I am sure it served as inspiration ...

A writers dreams, are like a crazy persons thoughts or maybe his thoughts, are just what that crazy person does whatever the case, his art sets him free, he opens ...