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Heyy chill girl. Haha things come and go :D Well firstly, i cant tell you wrote this out of emotion and true feelings, thats good. But keep in mind what ...

Nice poem. Can tell that you're writing from your heart, not just cos someone forced you to spit out something. Although some points can be improved on. Quoted from: "Don’t ...

Hand me a canvas Amidst the choir of creased chalk Pluck the feathers of joy for a brush Paint with the colours of love Ink dripping with new found bliss ...

Haha great use of puns there. No offense, but i dont really get the poem. :P maybe im just a literal kinda person. one point to note, try to use ...

Hey, great poem, full of emotion, the usual emotions that an average teen might feel. But personally, maybe you could change the context of it? Rather than setting it in ...

Wow i can smell your sadness. Sounds like you were really hurt. Personally, i think its a great piece full of emotion, i guess your wrote it fresh with hurt ...

Cool! Great piece. I like the clever rhymes and the precise words. Not too lengthy or anything. Short and sweet. Paints a great picture, and it gives readers the image, ...

Standing inside the glossy windows. Staring out to the busy walkway. Businessmen on their Nokias, chatting away. Students on their iPods, singing away. Tourist on their half-empty wallets, shopping aw