lizzytink

what the poem needs is more description. the setting needs to be more described. it is a little confusing when the bird is sleeping. Sleep my baby blackbird, Sleep till ...

okay i know i already wrote a review but desperate times call for desperate measures. the poem needs a little more meat in it. it is a good poem but ...

word choice the poem would make sense if you added a little more to it and make a more interesting poem. needs more description. if you added a little more ...

Written by: Lizzytink and Snickerdooly Chapter 1: The Beginning I awoke to a woman in white uniform standing at the foot of my bed. She wore a mask over her ...

wow its about a chicken and this seems a little dumb but you just needed to write something i guess. i need to do that sometimes to. it seems repetitive ...

the main chartacter is kinda wierd and the beggining needs a little more detail. like where he is going and stuff like that. i wasnt very cuaght in the beginning. ...

this is pretty good and all, but needs a little more detial

Written by: Lizzytink and Snickerdooly Chapter 1: The Beginning I awoke to a woman in white uniform standing at the foot of my bed. She wore a mask over her ...

Chapter 1: the beginning I awoke to a woman in white uniform standing at the foot of my bed. She wore a mask over her mouth and a tight wound ...