lizzytink

I love the shading in the second one. The first one has bold, bright colors that enunciate the texture which I love

Self Esteem. Soooo high school isn't working out for you? This is a list I conjured up. Stop whining and complaining. Things will go your way if you let them ...

i love your writing!! :) Diction is very important and you nailed it. good job, Lizz

Daddy, where are you? im around the corner and up your butt, sweetie oh okay mommy, where are you? im parked in the garage oh okay daddy? are you a ...

i love how you woke up in the middle of the night and how spontaneous this was. GOOD JOB!!! :))

okayyy... i like the idea that it seems as if the whole world left because you would lose your sanity quickly if you didnt have anyone to talk to. lolzombiess. ...

okayyy... i like the idea that it seems as if the whole world left because you would lose your sanity quickly if you didnt have anyone to talk to. lolzombiess. ...

Self Esteem. Soooo high school isn't working out for you? SAME! This is a list I conjured up. Stop whining and complaining . Things will go your way if you ...

this sucks crap. you have no flow or potantial of writing.

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these are the first two chapters of a story im writing. grade as harsh as possible. thanks!! :) Chapter 1 I stared out my window, searching for answers. The moon ...

slippery roots, wood spongy and pelted with moss, teaparty I misread pelted the first time as the verb rather than the adjective, which led, let me tell you, to quite ...

um its too long i think, it could've ended at, (please input text here) how does this work? what the heck? well any way i think the poem was pretty ...

um lets see here... o you need to be more descriptive. i was reading and almost fell asleep, well i am lying in bed, but thats not the point. i ...

preview the poem and try to think that your a kid. after all this is G rated. **I have no idea where this came from the words just sprung into ...