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Re: Chapter one: meeting the problem
Was kinda confusing. You might want to go through and edit it. I still thought the plot was good though. I also liked the characters. Keep it coming, i wanna ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Letter
This was really different, but i liked it. It was cool how he was fighting back and forth. I really really really wanna know what was in the letter!! Let ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: How You Break My Heart (Chapter 1)
Hmmmm i thought this was pretty boaring. I don't think you really need to drag on and on. After ahwile i kinda lost interest. Whats up with the Mummy thing? ...
Jul 3, 2008