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Re: The battle
Thank you:) This was a narritive for my english class, and I wanted some feedback from someone new. I see what you mean about the abbreviations, and I will look ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: xLogan's xTravagant Reviews!
THANK YOU!:)
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Two Gay Poems
hey, i like it!! I'm on the same boat as you on this situation. Its unique for a change:)
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Autumn Photography
wow, these are great. fall is the best time for taking pics:)
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: The battle
The Battle The pine trees surrounding me swayed in the cool breeze and yellow leaves fell to the dead grass. I pulled my knees to my chest and shivered. How ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Chapter one: meeting the problem
Was kinda confusing. You might want to go through and edit it. I still thought the plot was good though. I also liked the characters. Keep it coming, i wanna ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Letter
This was really different, but i liked it. It was cool how he was fighting back and forth. I really really really wanna know what was in the letter!! Let ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: I am hardly here beneath my feet
Wow, this is really good. I love the title. Its long, but it didn't loose its interest. The end is amazing!! I'm jelous. Keep writing, you rock :)
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: On my mind
Sorry if the format is wrong, i don't usually write poems :) As I start my day I start it with you. Do you know I'm with you? Every second ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Want to blow fish?
Wow this is really good! I wish i could draw like that. The shading is awsome. Your art is cute. Keep up the good work. :) It will pay off.
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: How You Break My Heart (Chapter 1)
Hmmmm i thought this was pretty boaring. I don't think you really need to drag on and on. After ahwile i kinda lost interest. Whats up with the Mummy thing? ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Valentines
Lucy strode down the hall of Sarton Middle School, not paying mind to anyone she passed and the ugly pink decorations hanging over the whole school. Her two best friends ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Can It Be?
That was good! I liked how decriptive it was.
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Hey guys
Hi, i don't really know what to write here, so ill just say stuff about me. I am 13 my name is Lizzy and i love to write and act. ...
Jul 1, 2008
