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I try to subtly explain things, but I don't really know how while still making it interesting. Any suggestions? And yes, Madeline is pretty much the main character. Of course, ...

Thanks for the great comments! Everyone seems to be commenting on the style, but I made it so one chapter's like that, another one's third person, and so on. I ...

Thanks for the help! The suggestions will be very helpful. And the story is written in present tense, or first person past tense. I just posted that, so check it ...