liz_isle

as the path that you sometimes walk brings you down, when you hesitate every single time to put a step further, because you are scared, because you are alone. as ...

i just smiled and laughed to myself when i read this. sort of reminding me of those old time when i was stucked in like situations.... those time you just ...

okay. what kind of line here? it's the 'that certain line' you read at the ever beginning of the first chapter of a book you read, be it the authors ...

hey guys :D ... so, have you ever felt The Burnout, especially for writing?? having no motivation at all to write, or scrawl, or even read, or even listening to ...

the reason it's confusing a bit is because somehow i didnt split it into 2 paragraphs. the full version is longer... i just put out the stanzas that link to ...

She is all I ever wanted to protect I've been hearing these taglines a few times "I feel like I just battled Goliath." "This must be what David had felt." ...

i see here you like greek mythology... i can sense the mood you put in this story..great! it's just that i suddenly remember this one book i saw at a ...

hey..liz here i gonna review your story a bit... "I always thought it’d be cool to be famous. I always imagined love would be perfect. And in my deepest dreams ...

You know you're a writer when you wake up in the morning and your draft is lying near your head on the bed. with a thought "didnt know i've fallen ...

hey there... you know, i haven't finished reading the chapters yet...but seriously your story is good. some people may feel offended here (if they read this) but i gotta say...you ...

first of all let me say this.... WOW...you guys are really good at this... i get my poem really analyzed. are you sure you guys in your teens??... :) you ...

Healed I’ll be doing fine without you As usual it’ll all get better as time goes True, a lot of things reminded me of you I felt your presence on ...

you know, i've been reading some reviews posted in people's works here. btw, i'm new here. been seeing a lot of comments on puntuation again and again in poems. such ...

hey there... your poem looks good. it's just that when i read it, the puntuation marks, the commas, the semicolon seems to disturb the flow of reading it. you intended ...