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This was beautiful. I related to it the minute I started reading it. I love how you wrote about something so close to the heart.

I really like the form that you chose to write in. The three lines. It;s really good!

I am afraid of love. I am afraid of relationships. I a so scared of unlocking myself to someone, I am certain that they'll run away. It's because I know ...

I liked this a lot. And I think that you could even bring this story out and make it more. I think what I really liked most about was how ...

I think that this poem was simply beautiful. You were able to make it so vivid with your words, i could actually see that little baby. The only problem I ...

Dread pours over me like a pool of sweat. Amie is walking up the stairs to me room. Thump-thump. My fists clench. "Natty! I-" Amie's voice stops when she sees ...

I think this is really beautiful! I especially like the last line!