livelaughskate

Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: True Heir, Chapter 1
I thought the first chapter has a great start. You did a great job on putting enough detail in it to suck the reader in. Great start to it! -livelaughskate ...
Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:06 am

Knowledge is knowing a tomato is a fruit; wisdom is not putting it in a fruit salad.
— Miles Kington