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Re: Cell Drawing - Original Character Design
How do we critique pictures? You should have used more purple? Well, I really like your picture. Especially the color, it really gives it life. Keep up the artistry.
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Heart
WOOT first person to review. Nothing I enjoy more than ruining your dreams before anyone else! Just kidding. I really like your first and last stanzas. It got a little ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: First Shakespearean Sonnet Attempt - No Title Yet
I can relate to sonnets. I had the greatest teacher in sixth grade who helped us create a whole book of poetry. This year and last year all we did ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue
Okay.. here is MY review. A little late-sorry! But I'm a future fan, so that's okay, right? Because I really, really like it.
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Can't even spare a piece of my mind
I am enchanted by your story, so expect a critique soon. I will do my very,very best to offer the best review I can possibly give and if this means ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight (Part Two)
A little crude in humor... but all in all it's pretty hilarious. Of course, I hate twilight to the ends of this earth, so in my mind anything that hates ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Death's Visit
I love this script... it makes me want to learn more about this man. I was beyond afraid that you had a good sense of humor, and would have him ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
I started this website through script frenzy; I was a bit skeptical at first but after poking around I find myself exited about being part of a community. I'm an ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: This Is My Fairytale
I don't adore this poem, but I was charmed by how passionately you defended it. I am not a fan of online critique for poetry, because I believe that it ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: I beg of you
This poem made me feel really happy,haha. What kind of sick person am I? I love this poem... It speaks to everyone who has been ravished by angst and molested ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Removed
I really enjoy this piece-poem? What ever which way you look at it. "icicles like scissors, snipping off dwarf fingers" beautiful. You could add another couple of lines after "and ...
Mar 9, 2009
