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littlemissgluttonous

  • Scripts Re: Fratricide

    I disagree, being in the same room with that effed up brother could turn anyone crazy, fast. Especially if herb just saw his brother killed. What I don't understand is ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Fickle Afternoon

    I love this poem; I love the whimsicle manner and the story it tells, though it seems slightly erratic. and as for punctuation: all or none. You have a commas ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • General Articles Re: True Freaks

    Hello again. I wake up, turn on my gateway and drift to this website, and you're on the "featured works" at the bottom. SO you're poem... you don't need a ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Twilight : The real story

    Omg god you are a genius. When I become a millionare im hiring you to write the script and produce this movie. Its hilarious, and whoever doesnt think so is ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Oh my god

    I like the reworked version.. and good for you, changing the wording around to make the poem stronger. I get so sick of people who put their things up for ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: For those lost souls..

    I really like this poem, it definitely encompasses the essence of those who know what the death of someone close to you feels like. broken faith it feels like someone ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Teenage Angst in Classical Greece: America 1920s-1940s

    Maybe this is my fault for refusing to warm up to a character like this, or maybe its my lack of sleep. Singing for six hours with a cold and ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Other Re: Them

    First, let me say that all the commments I made tonight were grumpy and contrary to opinion. I don't agree with what you wrote. I don't believe we there are ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Chapter 1 - Harry Who?

    I'm sorry for not liking your work, really I am, but I hate everything about Kyra. The name, first of all, sounds like you stole it from an anime. I ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: writer's block

    Write ridiculous fan fiction. I've been having the same problem as you, and I find creative ideas by purging myself of all of the crap that has clogged my brain; ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Poetry Discussion Re: A Basic Introduction to Poetry

    I completely agree about the structure; though it depends on what kind of poem you are writing. And i agree with whence, who I could quote but I'm lazy. TSUN: ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Falling Hard...

    I really liked that poem. Collage-poem. It strikes the right chords, painting images of our modern world in disconnected lines that do make a good story. Then Miss Teen USA ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Liar, Thief

    Okay, first person Yess. Obviously, no one else is dedicated to this forum. Or else they have a life... Okay, I like this poem. It's a little remniscent of Torn, ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Death of A liberator - corected spelling

    I really liked this story, though I'm not a big fan of history concerning world war II. But this was really exceptionally. My one annoyance was, "forever young?" Like that ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Other Re: The Purpose of Humankind

    I would like to agree with you, being very pro-earth preservation and feel that future generations need to reap our benefits, not suffer our irresponsibilities, but I also believe that ...

    Mar 12, 2009


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— W. Edwards Deming