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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Part 1 ,"I'm not under your charm,mrs Lily"

    Thanks Reisi! I'm not great at punctuation of I have already said,English isn't my native language. I am not getting discouraged , don't worry! I'll try to fix the mistakes ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Part 1 ,"I'm not under your charm,mrs Lily"

    Thank you very much for the detailed review!!! This will encourage me a lot to post the second part as soon as possible. English isn't my first language but I'm ...

    Jul 31, 2010


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