littleking

I like how there are no comments because we are all just talking about it in chat :p

This may never leave the literary spotlight.

Haha no worries :)

No problem, sorry if it seemed mean or nitpicky, I wasn't trying to be! Keep it up though, I want to read more!

Hey thanks :) Sorry about the blood, ever since watching Dexter I have become a rather bloodthirsty writer, there isn't really much else to say ;P The poison part was ...

And as for the "watched her leave her body" part, I kept it simple because these two know each other in both the spirit world and mortal world, so their ...

Thank you so much for the review :) All of your points were very helpful to me, and I have made revisions and mental notes for the future! A lot ...

Well, fortunately enough i created mine when i was seven ;D good luck to you!

Hey, thanks :) some names are actually based off of the fictional language that goes with this story, and others are just off the top of my head I guess ...