little.angelfire

for the peeps in chat that wanted to see. I don't think I ever took a pic of the one on my chest, though, and you in chat saw my ...

So to answer questions about the arm, i just didn't feel like drawing it XD And I wanted her floating so I could concentrate on her position, rather than the ...

So I haven't really drawn anything since I graduated high school, and I picked up my sketchbook and drew something =O It's kinda rusty (especially the two that are together. ...

Okay, so the following comments were little notes I put down as I was reading through it. They're just personal comments on some of your wording that I either like ...

I'm still not really digging the description of the old king. I think it's because you tell us a lot more than you show us. I think, instead, maybe you ...

haha, sorry for being unclear. I was a little pressed for time since I was in class. What I mean by punctuation is that you have--for instance--several exclamation points in ...

brace yourself, I think this might be kinda harsh. I enjoyed your prologue, but I started reading this, and I didn't get very far at all. I stopped reading after ...

I liked most of it. Good description, and you do a pretty balanced job of showing rather than telling. The biggest problem I have is when you allow Hannah's hood ...

ahahaha, I liked this XD *is a fan of Twilight, though* Still made me giggle ^.~ Okay...this isn't really a critique or anything, but just a little pet peeve. Don't ...

thanks areida XD I have never heard of someone complimenting a nose before XD and I'll vote for....Angels-symphony because she's complaining a lot ;p and I like to wreck things....I ...

Chachi-chaaaaaan!!! You're adorable!!!!!! *huggles to the point of breakage* o.o it wasn't me!! *sweeps under the rug* Lay Fay!!! *steals outfit* hehe My sister made me the bestest had for ...

alrighters, here's the almost finished product of my hair! Once I get some money, I'm gonna be buying green dye and dying the bleached parts green ^.^ I think it'll ...

Gwen, you're hair looks fine for a bad hair day XD haha, I'd love to see it on a good day, then ^.^ Easy, you look like someone I've met ...

Wow Squall, you look deep in thought with that pose! haha, cute ^.^ So I pretty disappeared for a while, but I come on every once in a to browse ...

The middle picture is the one pic that I have the most problems with. I like the other two, though. The main problem I have with the middle one is ...