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~jaw drops in amazement~ Wow! That is an amazing drawing! I would give a lot to be able to draw even half as well! Hehe. I can't draw. At all. ...

Well, this work was a great piece of prose. I would use a little more imagery: Scared he's going to kill me. Maybe you could be a little more descriptive, ...

Karina: Once I finally mastered the river's mighty current, I turn to Mistress Aurora, and ask, "How must I learn to control my powers?" "Karina, there is really no other ...

Karina: I am speechless. After joining the coven several years ago, I have finally received my powers, of water at least. I am still a novice at magic, but with ...

Karina: Part 2 Note: I have added something to Karina's character: She has powers of both Earth and Water, now. I sit against the sturdy trunk, cringing back from the ...

Karina: As I walk down the dusty dirt path, I find a shady oak, and stop to rest. All I can think about is the other members of the coven. ...

Whoa, that picture is amazing! However, there are a few things i'd do. Resize it, and perhaps crop out some of the black. Other than that, the moon part is ...

Whoa. That's like all I can say. This is remarkable! Your imagery is unusual, but you write it in such a way that most authors can't get away with. "Tell ...

Here's the profile of my character: Name: Karina Lachlan (you can change the name if you want to) Age: 21 Appearance: Long, jet-black hair, hazel eyes, olive skin, curvy yet ...

I particularly enjoyed this. :wink: I think it's great the way it is; not that much emotion, just sort of reminiscent. I like it. I honestly don't know what advice ...

Well, you are obviously very skilled at writing. But, I would try and make it a little less like Twilight (even though it's an amazing book, and you write your ...

Hey, I thought this was a really good story...you have great diction, and it was unpredictable. Yet, i understodd what was going on. Very nice work. :) Well, I found ...

hey, This poem is SOOOO awesome! I wish I could write as well as you do? How do the words flow so easily to you????????? LOL I particularly enjoyed this ...

These prison bars and prison gates Have painfully sealed many fates. Now I sit, within these walls, Until the day of departure calls. Though I sit in chains, I am ...

I took this picture in mid-March, off the side of a highway...haha. This is one of my pictures that I like, and I hope you do too. :D