lisalulu09

I've just read both parts of this chapter, and I'm loving it! :D Apart from the grammar problems, which xDudettex (Hi! :D) pointed out already, everything is fine. :)

This is very good. I really the narrator's voice. :) More, please. :)

There are a lot of typos, mainly in the speech - no full stops, mainly - but apart from that, it's brilliant. I love your writing style! :D Are you ...

This is really, really good. Very sweet! :D There are some typos and the tenses are mixed up in places, but apart from that, it all seems ok! :)

This is BRILLIANT. :D :D :D You managed to write in Stephanie Meyer's style so well, I felt like it could actually be a part of the series. :D Keep ...

This is brilliant. :D I love how Rose has turned out to be completely different to how I expected her to be - a younger version of Hermonie. xD I ...

Absolutely beautiful. I cam up with my own tune to sing along with it though. I hope that is okay! :D I will prolly be singing this for a while ...

Ahh... I have quite a lot, old and new, but... This is my most gorgeous man on the planet... Alex Davies (Lead singer of Elliot Minor). It's the dark blue ...

I loved this. I thought it was very sweet and I loved how you described their relationship. :D A few things: There are quite a lot of typos. Personally, I ...

This is very, very good! :D Is it part of a story or a standalone piece you wrote. :) :smt020 Lisa :smt020 Listening to: 'Why Does It Always Rain On ...

Hi. These are my first set of lyrics posted on here. Any comments appreciated. :) * Verse One: She smiles and it breaks your heart The twinkle in her eyes ...

Right, thanks, guys. I'll try and do one, so look out for it! :) :smt020 Lisa :smt020 Listening to: 'Freak Out' by Avril Lavigne. :D

Hi. :) This is probably a really stupid thing to post a discussion about, but has anybody got any tips on how to create a cool signtures? How do you ...

Right. :) My favourite things: Colour: Purple Food: Chocolate Hobbies: Listening to music (a weird mixture of things, it all depends on my mood. :D), writing, surfing the 'net, watching ...

Hi. :) I'm Lisa, and I've just joined YWS. I'm a novelist and songwriter (lyrics only at the moment), so I will post loads of lyrics and my current project, ...