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Re: I'm here to Help
Hi. :) I've got a bit of my teen drama/romance Electric Dreamer up here. You can access it via my profile. Can you check it out, please? :)
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: 'Electric Dreamer': Chapter Three: Maddie
Right, I'm not sure about this chapter, so any advice would be helpful. :) * I stared across the room at the boy who was eating a Big Mac. He’s ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Lily Foxglove 5.2
Loved it. :D Were you happening to be listening to Hate (I Don't Really Like You) when you put one of the lyrics in this bit? :P Next bit, please. ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: 'Electric Dreamer': Chapter Two: Scarlett
The next chapter. Oh - I forgot to mention the viewpoints change. :oops: Hopefully the order will be clear after a while. * Tom sat on the swing, kicking off ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Lily Foxglove 5.1
I. Want. More. Now . Plese????
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Lily Foxglove 4.2
Ahahaha. She threw water on his head. :lol: It's brilliant. That's all I can say. :D Next bit. Now :)
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Untitled - chapter two, part two *edited*
Right, all the crit. has already been said, so all that's left for me to say is... amazing ! :D I want more now ! About titles, I can't think ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: 'Electric Dreamer': Chapter One: Amber
Right, I started this teen fiction novel in June 2008. The inspiration behind it was this: Talk about random inspiration! :D Anyway... here is Chapter One. :) * “One, two, ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: February
Um... All I can say is that this is utterly amazing and very original and extremely cute. :D It could make a very interesting part of a novel, methinks. :) ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Untitled, chapter two part one *edited*
Very, very good! A brilliant return from writer's block! :D :D :D
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Character/novel's theme songs
I can't do one for my current novel-in-progress but here's what I think fit the character, complete with lyrics that I think are perfect . The girls are MCs and ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Really?
Right, all the necessary comments about grammar have been said already, so all that's left to say is... This is a very sweet little story that kept me hanging on ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Goddess
There is one major grammar problem that stands out for me... where are the speech marks?!?! For some reason, this confused me. :? But I'm sure that with some editing, ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Choosing You
For some reason, I got confused with the boys. :? That might just be me though. Ha ha. :lol: Apart from thAt, this is very, very good, and I'd love ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)
Hi. :D I really liked this. It seemed very original and like it could be a very entertaining thing to read. :D So apart from... My dad had gone or ...
Apr 5, 2009