liquiddeath

that was amazing, i really enjoyed reading it. It kinda gave me chills reminding me of a relative who died from drowning

I like it, it really reeled me in. I think its a great start although u didn't say much about the battle with the demon u kinda ended it fast ...

Wow thanks man this will really help me out, I'll try to use better colour combinations next time. As i said before I'm kinda a newbie right now but I'll ...

I'm kinda new to all this poem writing and story writing but i joined this community to develop my writing skills so Thanks for the feedback I'll defiantly try harder ...

She has eyes never seen before Deep navy blue that everyone will adore Her pale light skin ever so smooth and soft Can attract the angels who would have thought.. ...

RAWR I'm new! heh and after checking out this site.. i think its pretty awesome