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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Someone

    I have to agree with a lot of what Ayra has said so theres not much more I can say, other than a bit of punctuation can very helpful to ...

    Jan 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Grievance

    you may want to change "stratosphere" to something a bit simpler, like "the heavens" for instance. It draws the attention of the reader and interrupts the rhythm for longer than ...

    Jan 1, 2008


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling