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Yea, as people above me have said this piece of work is a bit small to do a full review on, but I'm not that good at doing reviews anyway. ...

OK first off i am not very good at the grammar and spelling and because of all the people that got here before me and done a great job about ...

OK, this once got quite a lot of description in (I'm told i can go a little over the top with description, so please tell me if it is too ...

Thanks for the tips, needed someone to criticize my writing. I did the story on Word and it automatically puts two l in duelling.

Hi I'm new so I haven't done much writing before, but well i wrote a short piece and wondering what people think of it. Counties A boy with jet black ...

Liked the story, yea there were a few spelling mistakes, but well you can't have everything can you? :D