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She would break the bars with her mind powers enabling herself to escape.-Telapathy from Heather from Heather's Fights What would you do if you caught your lover cheating on you ...

I found this story to be a good story. Alot of details on what happened during this particular situation. It made me feel emotion. He didnt finish the message which ...

He sat patiently in Math class waiting for Lia to make her move. He likes her blonde flowy hair, warm smile and blue eyes. She usually asks him for help ...

It was beautiful in its rhythm and wording. I liked your way of explaining that fairytale magic doesnt exist but the magic of nature does. It was a great description ...

Hello nice to meet you. Its good to see someone else thats new. I like your work so far. I cant wait to see more.

The poem was well thought out. You used amazing imagery. The poem came to life and when you mentioned winter in the poem I saw the garden die down.

Great! This place is neat. There are forums for chatting as well as forums for poetry, stories, and fanfiction.I just started too. I like this forum the most so i ...

Great! This place is neat. There are forums for chatting as well as forums for poetry, stories, and fanfiction.I just started too. I like this forum the most so i ...

Great! This place is neat. There are forums for chatting as well as forums for poetry, stories, and fanfiction.I just started too. I like this forum the most so i ...

I am Lima. Starting at age 16 I wrote science fiction or fanfiction. One in particular was about a seventeen year old girl named Heather who had powers to move ...

I liked the suspence and tragedy. It gave me the feeling that the kid was desperate to help. The poem was knocking at my door! The fact that it really ...

The grammar wasnt fully correct but the way you detailed the story was precise. It was amazing how Draco had contemplated a big, bad decision by remembering a time when ...

A great story. Your character had displayed a brave and kind act. I loved how he saved his enemies life and gained respect in the end. The only problem with ...

Your story had kept me reading and not alot of stories have that affect. However, You didnt go in much details on why that man wanted to commit suicide. It ...

The punctuation was a little off but overall it was beautiful! It gave me a really relaxed feeling. Im in love with the detail, and imagery. It was dark but ...