lilymoore

This isn’t bad but I have to say, please don’t post whole works in bold print. It can be a distraction and an eyesore. Normally, I despise repetition like this, ...

Hey there Monument! Lily here and it’s time for reviewing! *jumps into the reviewmobile* AWAY! The rapist wants to take your body to satisfy his diabolical ends. he only wants ...

Hey there Roo, the names lily and I

First of all, the theme is good and very simple. Its refreshing to see a poem that has such an uncluttered, basic theme. A bridge of colors hangs motionless in ...

Shina! I’m back! “Boy, I did I great job, didn’t I?” “Boy, I did a great job, didn’t I?” It made me wonder if it was the volcanoes doing or ...

Hey Shina! Don’t fear, it’s just Lily. ^^ A stream of crimson surged down the coward's face, forming a pool of the substance below his face. The repetition of ‘face’ ...

Hey, last one. Same idea, different lyric set. #4. The Truth I gave you a chance And you shot it down I don’t know what I’m supposed to say Was ...

Okay, Part 2. I’m just going to do what I did with the first one. Here it goes. #2. Your Backyard We had a good four years But then things ...

Hey tnme, I’m here, do no fear. Anyway, because there is so much in each post, I’m just going to go through each song individually and comment on things that ...

This is gooood! Cherry blossums, spring rain , whore’s skin, you pray for the chance to experience that again, not knowing if you will be answered by sweet voices, or ...

Hey Rascal. Not going to nitpick but I am point to touch on the big stuff and ramble senselessly in the hope of making sense and getting the point I ...

Eeek! Sorry, I know I shouldn't have been hiding under the bed, but I couldn't resist. Anything to make me not go up there alone, I tried. This reads so ...

Hi there hero! I won’t get too into detail here as most of the nitpicks have been made but I’ll touch briefly on some things. Detail There are some places ...

I’m not the best judge of poetry Kyllorac but I had to review this at least a little when I saw the name Laura-Lee. My best friend from grade school ...

Okay, I have to admit, there is something mildly sadistic in this story Anti. Setting I’m not really sure where we are. At some points in the story, the setting ...