lilymoore

I mostly just wanted to get you guys opinion on Multiple POV. I've been writing my novel in Multiple POV, nearly every character has a moment where I tell things ...

I picked Other as well because it's often a combination of factors that lead me to read a whole story. Title is a big thing because if they've created an ...

Where I live, there are three towns I go to regularly and each has there own gas station. The first one is the owners nickname, Tubby's. The second one os ...

Hey, Lily is here by will of her psychic powers. :D I think you have a lovely image idea but it feels like you really added a lot of contrast ...

Absolutely no bonfires for this box, Ed. But this is a very cute piece of craftsmanship. Well, of decorating craftsmanship. I’m guessing you didn’t make the box (for some reason ...

Nutty! How dare you think the original is better than yours. This wolf is awesome. You have a wonderful eye here and the proportion is great. The background added a ...

Eek, I love Inuyasha! Haven’t watched the show in a while but I still think he’s cuuute! *fan girl squeels* But Esther pointed out the major stuff. The only real ...

This just reminds me fifth fifth grade when we read Sadako and the Thousand Paper Cranes and then the class had a project to go and fold 1000 paper cranes. ...

Do you ever just see someone and think to yourself, “I need to write their story.”? Every now and then, it happens where I see someone and I really am ...

OMG, this is so cute. I can’t really say anything negative about it except for agreeing with what Durrie said with the text really needing to stand out. I think ...

Hey there water lily! *snuggles for being a lily* So, as far as shading and technique goes, I think this is wonderful. However, I’m guessing that the assignment involved only ...

Hiya Rose! Okay, so this isn’t a bad picture. Actually, this is a really nice picture, but I think that more than anything, you have such a lovely picture here ...

Hello Captain! Arrrg! I’ll say right off the bat that this Alice is especially cute. The colors are nice and the expression on her face is very sweet and charming. ...

Hello, kidashka, and Yowsers! I think these are all actually really good images, paddle hands or no paddle hands. :D I’ll just say overall that their great so I won’t ...

Hi there JemJive! I’m really just going to give you some overall advice because Ninja covered the smaller things I would have mentioned. Really, you need to find the balance ...