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Re: Godrunner
Hi Loveless!!! Okay, I’m going to say off the bat that the title is definitely attention catching. I slowly kicked the disembodied head of my victim down the stone path ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Prologue - The Stray Flame (18+ for language)
Okay, I'm going to appologize right away for any mistakes that might have been made to this as it was from NaNo. And for the language which is the reason ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: When we became Stars
Hey there Knightly knight. Lily at your service. *bows* We were contented at being pretty and winking at mortals who searched the heavens for a ray of hope. I know ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: The Sun.
Wow, this is a stunning picture. The contrast is so beautiful with the bright, nearly blinding sun sitting so close to the shadow and darkness of the tree. Another aspect ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: I'm Back and Ready to Review!
Done to the power of 4. Come on peoples!!! Hit me!!!
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 1 continuation
Hi there anima…um…again. Haha. I just won’t leave you alone, will I? Once again, it seems like the little things have already been picked apart but I do want to ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: A Little Fantasy Chapter 1: A New Beginning
Hi there anima…again. It looks like people have definitely hit all of the issues as far as nitpicks but I’ll just do an overview if that’s okay. Dialogue I do ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Draft help: Prologue to the fantasy ver 2
Hi there anima, again. I’m back and ready to kick this prologues butt…okay, to be honest, Aqua got the major stuff but I will touch on characters a bit. Alex ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Save Me
Lily here, your faithful servant/reviewer, at your service. *bows* Well, lets just go through this stanza by stanza. Cool beans. :D I dreamed of a thousand nights and only one ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: I'm Back and Ready to Review!
I took a break off of Reviewing to participate in NaNoWriMo. But now I'm back and I have some major reviewing to do. I mostly like to review Romantic Fiction, ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Have a NaNoWriMo.org account? (08)
misslilymoore this year. Don't let me write alone this year.
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: NaNoWriMo Young Writer Program-not associated with YWS
YWP is, as you probably guessed, is run through the original NaNo. I've never done anything other then the original NaNo myself but I think the YWP (totally almost typed ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Holaa (:
Instructors- They instruct! That means they critique thoroughly and will make you a wonderful writer. If you want a down and dirty, nitty-gritty, nit-picky review, these are the best people ...
Oct 21, 2009 -
Re: Closing the Chatroom?
What I meant by schedual, I suppose I should explain. If there were to be a schedual, it would be based around the schedual of the Mods rather then the ...
Oct 18, 2009 -
Re: Closing the Chatroom?
Right away, I'll have to say that if chat goes away for good, I'll probably cry and write bad emo twilight fanfics in pink ink with a sparkly blue pen. ...
Oct 18, 2009
